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Friday, November 4, 2011

space fight



Once there were aliens called Matzo,Melvin,Lorenzo and Tevita . They all lived on a planet could Taiseni. All they can do is play around with there powers that has sun and clouds and stars. Witch side would you pick Earth or planet taiseni? On a wonderful and horrible day there was a alien called Tevita attacking planet Taiseni. And he there was a buzzer in tevita planet which they couldn't go there.So they all said."you can stay here if you want to okay ". And it became a cool day. Until a horrible boy called Lorenzo became all that. He will always be a bully to the matzo and the tevita's. Which we all had a battle against a man called Melviny came with his army which we are versing Lorenzo. And we all came a tie but Lorenzo died owwwwwwww may be....
THE END....

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mateo,
    I am a student at the University of South Alabama assigned to your blog.
    I like your story. You are very good at creating interesting names. They are all names I have never heard before. Perhaps it is because we live in different countries!
    I think your pictures are very good. That guy looks like really good and colorful.
    Keep up the nice writing. Thank you for the post.

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