As I was getting ready for the race I felt the biggest rumple in my tummy.When Mr Burt said ready set then the hooter went. As I ran across the field and throw the gate.I felt the thick black mud witch felt like a gooey bog of Poo.When I ran through and past the cows it smelt like a bigger group of cow gathering together with Poo so I ran as fast as I can.My heart was pounding out of my chest .Running continuously all the way I ran all the way struggling for air until I got closer to the finish line. It was a struggle to the finish line. people chasing you to the end like it was the end of the world.I have accomplished my goal and game a placing In the race. .
Wow mateo you need to fix some of your words and by the way it's sound good.
ReplyDeleteKEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.