The reborn

This morning we all completed our first writing sample for 2013 I have posted it just as I wrote it in the the 40 min that we were given so that throw out this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made.



In a world peace a little boy could mone who was working in class hearing voices from left to right telling him to go to the toilet before something happens.So he went for  walked on the field looking up in the sky looking at the bird disappearing like no one noticed it.So he Walked up to two boy whose names were George and oliver asking them if they saw anything disappearing and they said yes.So he walked in to the staff room George and oliver spying  at the teacher disappering one bye one.So they told every one that people are gonna start disappering so no belived them only the poeple the belived in magic belived them.So they charged as fast as they can to the magic room  found out there was an oldman that was just sitting down in frount of the light just telling us that the tolit is the best hide out so the man said every minnet he always has a vison every minnet so he had anthere vison saying there are  gonna be over loaded  teddy bear undercaver so every chid who had a teddy bear they are gonna be lead to the tolit.So as mone and George and oliver was felling low as they were having a nice drink felling over loaded  ther were running side to side left to right getting every one out af there bilding looking at they house disappering so every was in the tolit looking at the people and the house disappering one bye one they even saw the shinning star disappering everythaing was so dark and scary after a few week later.

the world was bored again the sun,moon,sky,star were all reborn Mone George and Oliver were proud of there selfs for what they did.