This term we had to pick our Character Description I picked my little brother.
what my little brother look’s like? My little brother is small he has soft brown skin and he has black hair like the dark sky
his eyes are brown as a dog. The kind of person he is? he’s shy around people. He get crazy when he eats chocolate and likes to play around . The thing they like to do? he likes to play rugby with his friends and when hes bored. likes to watch t.v when he’s bored. sleeps a lot in the afternoon and also
likes the girls a lot. What you enjoy doing with them?I Like playing rugby with him and like play races. Sometime we watch videos at night time and day. and his name is Sione taufa Taiseni
I like the way you have had a go at using some of the Literary Techniques we have looked at Mateo. It would have been better to take out the questions and just include the descriptive writing about Sione!
ReplyDeleteMrs Nua